对联体诗（开阔诗野）

罗志海

绿艾苑 发表于 2018-10-11 17:02
七绝  志海奇才（藏头 对联诗体）
志达珠峰空浩宇，
海通法岸了红尘。

谢谢版主佳诗


广袤

壶中世界沉浮事
墨里春秋跌宕情
碧水操琴弹朗月
红枫染岭醉晨风


Vast

In the ink autumn and spring
feelings of the ups and downs
In the bottle world
rising and sinking things

By the blue water
I played lute to the bright moon
The red maples dyed ridge
intoxicated the morning wind

10/12/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7055首对联体诗
The 7,055th Two Pairs of Couplets

绿艾苑

志达珠峰空浩宇，
海通法岸了红尘。
奇融妙笔生天韵，
才涌华章化凤麟。

罗志海

绿艾苑 发表于 2018-10-13 06:33
志达珠峰空浩宇，
海通法岸了红尘。
奇融妙笔生天韵，

今天可以译出来发表

弯弓锯草

信步徐来，数朵彩霞江上坐
飘然隐去，几声青鸟日边停

野老村夫

欣赏佳制，亦联亦诗，妙！

罗志海

绿艾苑 发表于 2018-10-11 17:02
七绝  志海奇才（藏头 对联诗体）
志达珠峰空浩宇，
海通法岸了红尘。

志海奇才（藏頭詩）

志達珠峰空浩宇
海通法岸了紅塵
奇融妙筆生天韻
才湧華章引鳳麟


Zhihai Is An Extraordinary Talent（A hiding head poem）

You ambition arrived the Mount Qomolangma
saw through the vast universe

Sea leading to the realm of transcending life and death
understood the red dust world

A magic pen miraculously integrated into
grew rhymes of nature

Your brilliant writing emerged talents
introduced phoenixes and unicorns
in large numbers

10/12/2018對聯體 ● 七絕 綠艾苑著，羅志海譯
Couplet Poem ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Lu Aiyuan
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第7060首對聯體詩
The 7,060th Couplet Poem

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/zhihai-is-an-extraordinary-talent-a-hiding-head-poem/

220楼

http://bbs.zhsc.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=5916477&page=8#lastpost

241楼

http://www.hkscxh.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=855173&page=9#lastpost

100http://www.hkscxh.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=817248&extra=&page=4

罗志海

绿艾苑 发表于 2018-10-13 06:33
志达珠峰空浩宇，
海通法岸了红尘。
奇融妙笔生天韵，

请乘兴再写对联体诗！

罗志海

弯弓锯草 发表于 2018-10-13 09:20
信步徐来，数朵彩霞江上坐
飘然隐去，几声青鸟日边停

桃源麗水

信步徐來，數朵彩霞江上坐
飄然歸去，幾聲青鳥日邊停
靜觀默察，桃源不羨凡塵鬧
長考深思，隱士自娛麗水清

注：第一二句彎弓鋸草作，第三四句羅志海作。


The Peach Garden And The Beautiful Water

Step by step slow to come
a few pink clouds sat on the river
Floating in the air returned
with the several sounds
stopped beside the sun
the green birds

Considering in depth
a hermit amused himself
the beautiful water clear
Silent to observe
the Peach Garden
didn’t envy the noising mortal world


Note: first and second sentences by Wangongjucao.
Third and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.

10/12/2018對聯體 ● 十一絕 羅志海譯
Couplet Poem ● Eleven Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第7061首對聯體詩
The 7,061th Couplet Poem

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-peach-garden-and-the-beautiful-water/

32楼

http://www.swsm.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=16718#lastpost

242楼

http://www.hkscxh.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=855173&page=9#lastpost

108http://www.hkscxh.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=817248&extra=&page=4

绿艾苑

罗志海 发表于 2018-10-13 15:37
志海奇才（藏頭詩）

志達珠峰空浩宇

谢谢您！还要继续向您学习！

绿艾苑

罗志海 发表于 2018-10-13 15:44
请乘兴再写对联体诗！

一定！望不吝赐教！