对联体诗（开阔诗野）

刘继文

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罗志海

谢谢诗友赏识！

罗志海

蝶舞莺啼

一壶浊酒重阳月
八句律诗白露霜
蝶舞梨园摇雪韵
莺啼藕榭盗莲香


Butterflies Danced And Orioles Cried

A pot of the turbid wine
moon in the Double Ninth Festival
Eight verses of the poem
frost in the White Dew Season

Butterflies danced
in the pear garden
shaking the snow rhymes
Orioles cried
in the lotus root pavilion
stole fragrances of the lotus flowers

8/3/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第6619首对联体诗
The 6,619th Two Pairs of Couplets

罗志海

柳手花心

两座青山叠几案
一轮明月坐琴台
风牵柳手絮流浪
雨动花心竹感怀


Hand Of Willow And Heart Of Flower

Two green mountains
piled on the tea table
A bright moon
sat on the lute table

Rain moved heart of flower
bamboos recalled with emotion
Wind handed in hand of willow
catkins roam

8/9/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第6672首对联体诗
The 6,672th Two Pairs of Couplets

刘继文

赏学佳作，运笔流畅，遣词考究，意蕴深厚，真挚回味，问好！

罗志海

刘继文 发表于 2018-8-11 05:45
赏学佳作，运笔流畅，遣词考究，意蕴深厚，真挚回味，问好！

谢谢版主赏识，早安！

罗志海

古典


二月柔风君醉醉
三春细雨妾痴痴
岳阳楼记范天下
黄帝内经穿晷时


Classics


In February
in the tender breeze
you are drunk
In the late spring
in the drizzle
who is obsessed?
your wife

Article of the Yueyang Tower
modeling the world
Huang Di's Canon of Medicine
crossing time

8/20/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第6741首对联体诗
The 6,741th Two Pairs of Couplets

刘继文

赏学佳作，运笔流畅，意蕴深厚，清新回味，问好！

罗志海

刘继文 发表于 2018-8-22 07:15
赏学佳作，运笔流畅，意蕴深厚，清新回味，问好！

谢谢版主点评！

刘继文

赏学佳作，感受情怀，运笔流畅，意蕴深厚，真挚回味，问好！