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 楼主| 发表于 2020-3-4 10:07 | 显示全部楼层
声音的魅力

北海三潮咆哮波涛卷无垠掀巨浪
黄河九曲猿声峡谷催浩瀚壮豪情
风骚辞赋打通灵感处处张扬魅力
婉转歌喉陶冶性情时时涤荡心灵

注:第一三句钱永德作,第二四句罗志海作。


The Charm Of Voice

Three tides in the North China Sea roar waves
roll the limitlessness and lift the huge billows
In the nine bends of the Yellow River
the ape sounds in gorge urge the vastness and expand lofty sentiments

Feng, Sao, Ci and Fu opening up inspiration
in everywhere, showing charm
At all times euphemistic singing cleansing the mind
molding temperament

Note: first and third sentences by Qian Yongde.
Second and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.

3/3/2020格律体新诗 ● 十四绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Fourteen Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9568首对联体诗
The 9,568th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内有几十位诗人参与创作。
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/river-and-lake/#content
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-10 21:41 | 显示全部楼层
俠影柔情

紅顏書劍海天游,豪傑飄飄俠影
翠竹琴弦山水曲,美眉脈脈柔情
慈善連綿盈世界,修身徳厚為上
鐘聲繚繞醒人間,禮佛心誠則靈

注:第一三句清溪觀魚作,第二四句羅志海作。


Chivalrous Figure And Tender Affection

Red face, book and sword touring between the sea and the sky
a hero’s flying chivalrous figure
Green bamboo and zither string playing the landscape music
a beauty full of tender affection

Charity is continuous in the world
and self-cultivation is the best thing
The bells coiling up to wake the world
venerate the Buddha
work only when one believes in it sincerely

Note: first and third sentences by Qingxiguanyu.
Second and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.

4/8/2020格律體新詩 ● 十三絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Thirteen Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9868首對聯體詩
The 9,868th Two Pairs of Couplets

後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則(草稿)》寫作,每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(絕句),是一種格律體新詩。目前國內已有幾十位詩人參與創作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... -landscape/#content
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-12 06:12 | 显示全部楼层
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-12 06:13 | 显示全部楼层
欣赏

诗可以舒心美乐
花没能耀眼常开
窗前红鸟啁啾去
月下乌篷欸乃来


Enjoyable

Poetry can be enjoyable and beautiful
Flowers can't bloom dazzlingly always
In front of the window, the red bird was chirping away
Below the moon
the creak of oars of the black tarpaulin boat came

4/11/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9872首对联体诗
The 9,872th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... onsulation/#content
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-21 19:56 | 显示全部楼层
原因

天边云妹俏丽
树上杏儿脆甜
醉我非因酒故
迷君本是花缘


Because Of

Apricots in the tree are crisp and sweet
A cloud girl is pretty in the horizon
I'm not drunk because of alcohol
You in love is because of flowers, this is the reason

4/21/2020格律體新詩 ● 六絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Six Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9929首對聯體詩
The 9,929th Two Pairs of Couplets
後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則(草稿)》寫作,每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(絕句),是一種格律體新詩。目前國內已有幾十位詩人參與創作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/wonderful-beads/
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
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