对联体诗（开阔诗野）

罗志海

玉门新风 发表于 2018-4-16 10:56
章法有序，运笔娴熟，收放自如，

谢谢版主赏识，祝晚安！

罗志海

仲春歌

燕裁竹叶情浓郁
我画荔枝笔洒脱
草草花花烟柳岸
风风雨雨仲春歌


Songs Of The Mid Spring

Swallows cut the bamboo leaves
feelings are thick
I paint litchis
brush is free and easy
Grass and flowers
on the bank of the smoky willows
Rain and wind
songs of the mid spring

4/15/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第5712首对联体诗
The 5,712th Two Pairs of Couplets

罗志海

意趣

停车询问花何谢
上网观察水泛流
万里江山屏画美
千秋风月管弦悠


Interest

Parking
asked why the flowers withered
Surf the internet
watched the water flooding
Ten thousand miles of the country
the painting screen pretty
A thousand of wind and moon
wind and stringed instruments leisurely

4/19/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第5738首对联体诗
The 5,738th Two Pairs of Couplets

罗志海

玉门新风 发表于 2018-4-15 11:51
清新自然生动流畅，韵味宽厚赏学问好。

谢谢赏识。要不要你写几首对联体诗，由我来翻译？

罗志海

悠缓乐趣

雨中燕舞山迎客
荷下蛙嬉水送舟
深虑小河流历史
沉吟明月映春秋


Slow Pleasure

In rain, swallows dance
mountains greets guests
Under the lotus, playing frogs
water sends boats off

Forethought of the small river
it flows history
Meditate the bright moon
it reflects autumn and spring

4/23/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第5791首对联体诗
The 5,791th Two Pairs of Couplets

罗志海

情意盎然

霞飘水面寻诗意
鹊跃枝头入画屏
秋韵如金圆舞曲
月光似水舔犊情


Feelings Thick

Clouds float above the surface of the water
look for the poetic moods
Magpies jump on the branches
into the painting screen

The autumn rhymes like gold
the waltz
The moonlight like water
feeling of licking the calf

5/1/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第5836首对联体诗
The 5,836th Two Pairs of Couplets

玉门新风

幽婉典雅，用词洗练，结构工稳，品赏问好！！
　　

玉门新风

朴实自然，余味悠长！感情真挚，意蕴饱满。

罗志海

谢谢版主厚意！

罗志海

不改初衷

煥發青春求大義
充盈活力寫雄心
重彈歌曲調詳熟
原配夫妻情最深


Do Not Change The Original Intention

Rejuvenate youth
pursue the great righteousness
Filling vigor
write the great ambition

Again play music
the tune is detailed and skilled
Original matching husband and wife
their love is deepest

5/6/2018對聯體 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第5883首對聯體詩
The 5,883th Two Pairs of Couplets