对联体诗（开阔诗野）

振波浪清

再试试七绝前两句：
韶山红日红中国
遵义新程新北京

罗志海

振波浪清 发表于 2018-4-3 12:38
再试试七绝前两句：
韶山红日红中国
遵义新程新北京

http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 2-76d0aeba7ba2.html
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 6-32dc95ad2487.html

罗志海

野老村夫 发表于 2018-3-25 12:10
欣赏佳作！问好！

请你写对联体诗，我来翻译
http://www.hkscxh.net/forum.php? ... p;extra=&page=3

振波浪清

罗志海 发表于 2018-4-3 15:16
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxiang57711df8-e615-48b9-98e2-76d0aeba7ba2.html
http://www.chinapoesy ...

祝福美好，互相学习:strong:

罗志海

千古事

燕語皆言千古事
鶯歌盡唱九江情
韶山紅日紅中國
遵義新程新北京

注：第一二句羅志海作，第三四句振波浪清作。


Things Of A Thousand Ages

Twitters of swallow all say
things of a thousand ages
Songs of oriole all sing
feelings of the nine rivers
In Shaoshan
the red sun, the red China
From the new journey of Zunyi
to new Beijing

Note: first and second sentences by Luo Zhihai.
Third and fourth sentences by Zhenbolangqing.

4/3/2018對聯體 ●七絕羅志海譯
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第5658首對聯體詩
The 5,658th Two Pairs of Couplets

罗志海

振波浪清 发表于 2018-4-3 18:57
祝福美好，互相学习

请你最后润色一下。

http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxiang4671db0a-b9a3-4e8c-823c-20dfc3b14ee5.html

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/things-of-a-thousand-ages/

http://www.hkscxh.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=793653&extra=&page=4

振波浪清

罗志海 发表于 2018-4-4 06:54
请你最后润色一下。

http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxiang4671db0a-b9a3-4e8c-823c-20dfc3b14ee5.htmlhtt ...

继续:strong:：
酒举中秋连月喝
琴横雁阵对云弹

罗志海

振波浪清 发表于 2018-4-4 14:15
继续：
酒举中秋连月喝
琴横雁阵对云弹

猿声

黄山夜雨猿声烈
赤壁古风桨影寒
酒举中秋连月喝
琴横雁阵对云弹

注：第一二句罗志海作，第三四句振波浪清作。


Sounds Of Apes

In the Yellow Mountain
the night rain
sounds of apes strong
On the Red Cliff
the ancient wind
shadows of oars cold

Lifted a cup of wine
in the Mid-autumn
drank with moon
A transverse lute
played to clouds
before formation of flying swan goose

Note: first and second sentences by Luo Zhihai.
Third and fourth sentences by Zhenbolangqing.


4/3/2018对联体 ●七绝罗志海译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第5666首对联体诗
The 5,666th Two Pairs of Couplets

http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxiang42707bbd-3e9f-4769-86ff-d10d7011ad95.html

https://www.poemhunter.com/luo-zhihai/poems/

振波浪清

罗志海 发表于 2018-4-4 20:52
猿声

黄山夜雨猿声烈

猿声
:strong:
黄山夜雨猿声烈:strong:
赤壁古风桨影寒:strong:
酒举中秋连月喝
琴横雁阵对云弹

振波浪清

继续
风过酒楼风也醉
雨亲烟岸雨何迷