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 楼主| 发表于 2019-12-22 21:27 | 显示全部楼层
傳世之作

恩高義重,今生當償不盡恩義真情難忘
聚短離長,過往曾記幾多聚離淚眼相瞧
秀影一生,譽冠塵世清香周蓮婀娜陶菊
文章千古,氣吞彩虹壯闊蘇海磅礴韓潮

注:第一三四句羅志海作,第二句Kenobiwan作。


Enduring Work

Short time to gather together and long time to leave
once we remembered how much gathering and leaving
our tearful eyes saw each other in the past
Your grace and personal loyalty are high and heavy
I can’t repay your grace and personal loyalty endless
but your true feeling difficult to be forgotten this life

Beautiful shadows in life
good reputations in front of the dust world
refreshing fragrant Zhou Lotus and graceful Tao Chrysanthemum
Articles forever
swallow the rainbow
magnificent Su Sea and majestic Han Tide


Note: first, third and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.
Second sentence by Kenobiwan.

12/21/2019格律體新詩 ● 十六絕 羅志海譯
Metric New Poetry ● Sixteen Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第9228首對聯體詩
The 9,228th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-12-24 15:33 | 显示全部楼层
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 楼主| 发表于 2019-12-24 15:34 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 罗志海 于 2021-2-2 16:00 编辑

春夏景

喜看春泥酥雨後
靜聆夏竹晃風前
時鳴山鳥流雲媚
未鎖禪門明月圓


Scenery Of Spring And Summer

Joyful to see spring mud soft after rain
Quiet to listen to summer bamboos shaking before wind

The mountain birds sang sometimes
the floating clouds were charming

The bright moon was round
unlocked the Zen gate

12/23/2019格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9234首對聯體詩
The 9,234th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/curtain-rolls-up/

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-12-28 16:56 | 显示全部楼层
美好

拾翠畫中春嫵媚
留香心底蝶翩躚
虛懷可納清靈地
瘦筆能書浩瀚天


Beautiful

Picked up emerald in the painting
the spring was charming

Left fragrance in the heart
the butterfly was dancing

A thin pen can write the vast sky
An open mind can accept the clear and clever field

12/27/2019格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9253首對聯體詩
The 9,253th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2020-3-14 15:49 | 显示全部楼层
我與君

鄉愁糾結夢魂縈繞我心坎
羈客仿偟情竇聚凝君筆端
膽識恒深足智成親興大業
才思敏捷詩泉湧力挽狂瀾

注:第一四句羅志海作,第二三句錢永德作。


I And You

My nostalgia is entangled
and my dream soul haunts in my heart
Visitor's hesitation
and emotion are congealed in your pen tip

I have an agile imagination
my poetry spring is spewing
I do my utmost to stem a raging tide
Your courage is always deep
your knowledge is full
you personally start a huge undertaking

Note: first and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.
Second and third sentences by Qian Yongde.

3/13/2020格律體新詩 ● 十一絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9661首對聯體詩
The 9,661th Two Pairs of Couplets

後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則(草稿)》
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html寫作,每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(絕句),是一種格律體新詩。目前國內有幾十位詩人參與創作。
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-jeweled-palace/#content
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-17 08:17 | 显示全部楼层
描写  

一曲寒箫吹冷月
两杯小酒对红炉
柔风起草青山赋
细雨绘描绿水图


Described

Two cups of the small wine to the red stove
A cold flute played a piece of music to the cold moon
Drizzle described a picture of the blue water
The soft wind drafted the Green Mountain Fu

4/16/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9894首对联体诗
The 9,894th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/surmise-from-reason/#content
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-24 21:02 | 显示全部楼层
风光

山高自可兀立
道异不相为谋
春暖蝶衣鲜艳
风和燕嗓轻柔


Scenery

The mountain stands tall by itself
Different ways do not conspire
The spring warms and the clothes of the butterfly are colorful
The voice of the swallow is tender and the wind is gentle

4/24/2020格律体新诗 ● 六绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Six Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9949首对联体诗
The 9,949th Two Pairs of Couplets
后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-mattress/#content
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
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