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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-25 17:53 | 显示全部楼层
品味除愁

水际烟笼遮晚照
山头雾锁醉清秋
何人能品诗中味
闷酒怎除心上愁


Appreciate The Taste And Get Rid Of The Worries
 
In the end of the water, smoke envelops and covers the setting sun
In the mountain ridge, fog locks and intoxicates the clear autumn
Who can appreciate the taste of poetry?
How can I get rid of my worries by drinking?

4/25/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9953首对联体诗
The 9,953th Two Pairs of Couplets
后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/bright-sunny-sky/#content
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-25 19:59 | 显示全部楼层
忧伤快乐

感怀切切,独把花锄偷洒泪
思念深深,空题诗帕暗伤神
烟雾迷茫,岳阳楼上谈忧乐
风云变幻,铜雀台中笑古今


Sadness And Happiness

With deep feelings
she held a hoe alone and shed tears
Missing deeply
she wrote a poem on a handkerchief and secretly hurt the spirit

Smoke was confused
we talked about sadness and happiness
in the Yueyang Tower
Changes in the wind and the clouds
we laughed the ancient and modern times
in the Tongque Terrace

4/25/2020格律体新诗 ● 十一绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9954首对联体诗
The 9,954th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... allbladder/#content
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
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