对联体诗（开阔诗野）

忆竹林

学习佳作，秋祺

罗志海

忆竹林 发表于 2018-11-1 15:04
学习佳作，秋祺

谢谢首座，晨安！



思念慈母

笛响琼楼明月夜
眸穿秋水落花时
醒来发现枕头湿
梦里泪吟慈母诗


Thought Of My Loving Mother

Fluting in the richly decorated building
at the bright moon night
When the flowers fell
my eyes overlooked through the autumn water

After I woke
I discovery of my pillow was wet
In my dream with tears
I chanted poems about my loving mother

11/1/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7219首对联体诗
The 7,219th Two Pairs of Couplets

忆竹林

欣赏佳作，学习受益，问好老师，秋祺

罗志海

忆竹林 发表于 2018-11-3 12:49
欣赏佳作，学习受益，问好老师，秋祺

谢谢版主


静谧

又听稚燕舞风里
遥见老翁扫苑前
宁静溪泉花入睡
幽深涧谷蝶飞旋


Quiet.

I distant to see an old man sweeps
in front of the garden
Again I listen to the young swallows
dancing in the wind

In the secluded valley
butterflies fly and rotate
By the silent stream
flowers go to sleep


11/2/2018對聯體 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7228首對聯體詩
The 7,228th Two Pairs of Couplets

忆竹林

佳作堪赏，笔力不凡，精炼有致，学习问好

忆竹林

佳作堪赏，笔力不凡，精炼有致，学习问好

忆竹林

佳作堪赏，笔力不凡，精炼有致，学习问好

忆竹林

佳作堪赏，笔力不凡，精炼有致，学习问好

忆竹林

佳作堪赏，笔力不凡，精炼有致，学习问好

罗志海

忆竹林 发表于 2018-11-5 10:29
佳作堪赏，笔力不凡，精炼有致，学习问好

谢谢诗友


悠閒處世

滄桑入酒鸕鷀笑
淡泊出塵魂魄閑
滿腹楹聯通格律
一腔才氣聳雲天

Conduct Myself In Society Leisurely

The vicissitudes into wine
the cormorants smiled

Indifference out from the dust

my soul was leisure

Full belly of couplets
I accord with the law of poetry creation

A lump of my talent
rise in the sky

11/4/2018對聯體 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7241首對聯體詩
The 7,241th Two Pairs of Couplets

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