开心时刻

罗志海

开心时刻

锅中煎熬岁月
笔下流淌春秋
得意不言旧事
开心莫问缘由


The Happy Time

Years are being suffered in the pan
Under the pen, spring and autumn are flowing
Being pleased, I never talk about old things
Don't ask why I am happy

8/31/2020格律体新诗 ● 六绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Six Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第10656首对联体诗 The 10,656th Two Pairs of Couplets
后记:对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则》写作，每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等，共四句（绝句），是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets. The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/outshine-others/#content
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... e-c8dd7b732ad0.html

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