愁醉

罗志海

愁醉

故园花绽佳人醉
驿路絮飞羁客愁
岁月如歌林里唱
时光无影指间流


Worry And Are Drunk

Flowers are blooming in my home garden and beauties are drunk
On the post road, catkins are flying and passengers worry
Time without shadow flows through the fingers
The years like a song are sung in the forest

8/24/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第10622首对联体诗 The 10,622th Two Pairs of Couplets
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... ensnared-2/#content
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... e-c8dd7b732ad0.html

liping

韵味宛转悠扬，语言清新优美。唯妙唯肖，情景交融。向老师学习问好！

盛世红颜

欣赏佳作！感佩才情！问好诗友，祝您笔耕愉快。

林音独韵

品味佳作，文采斐然，形象生动；流畅自然，词巧悟深，赞赏学习！致意问好，顺祝笔丰！

罗志海

liping 发表于 2020-8-26 06:41
韵味宛转悠扬，语言清新优美。唯妙唯肖，情景交融。向老师学习问好！

谢谢诗友点评！

罗志海

盛世红颜 发表于 2020-8-30 10:34
欣赏佳作！感佩才情！问好诗友，祝您笔耕愉快。

谢谢诗友点评！

罗志海

林音独韵 发表于 2020-8-30 22:46
品味佳作，文采斐然，形象生动；流畅自然，词巧悟深，赞赏学习！致意问好，顺祝笔丰！ ...

谢谢诗友点评！

罗志海

夜色深沉

月影斜，志不移，挑燈夜讀
秋花瘦，人無寐，揮筆朗吟
水潺流，草繁茂，遁跡匿影
山宿醉，峰渺茫，動魂驚心

格律體新詩●十絕羅志海著譯
第10971首對聯體詩2020年11月11日


The Night Is Deep

The moon shadow is slanting
the ambition does not move
with a lamp, night reading
The autumn flowers are thin
the person is not sleep
wielding a pen and aloud chanting

The water murmuring to flow
the grass is luxuriant
disappearing
The mountains in the hangover
the peaks are distant and indistinct
thrilling

Metric New Poetry ● Ten Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
The 10,971th Two Pairs of Couplets,11/11/2020
http://www.swsm.net/thread-574568-1-1.html