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 楼主| 发表于 2018-11-2 06:54 | 显示全部楼层
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春蘇

期盼春來山早綠
吟哦水暖鴨先知
三章詠絮鶯喉囀
一筆淩雲深澗移


Spring Reviving


Recite the water is warm
and ducks are first know
Look forward to the spring comes
and the mountains are early green

Three paragraphs of lyrics chant catkins
The warbler's larynx singing
A brush of the reaching cloud
in the deep valley movings

11/1/2018對聯體 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-11-8 06:03 | 显示全部楼层
秋韵

几弦菊雅伴秋色
一盏茗香浮月魂
松涧清泉流玉韵
枫山红叶动花心


The Autumn Rhymes

A few strings chrysanthemums elegant
to accompany the autumn coloours
A cup of the fragrant tea
the moon’s soul is floating

In the pine valley
a clear spring flowing the jade rhymes
In the maple mountain
the red leaves move the flower minds

11/7/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-11-9 15:37 | 显示全部楼层
溯流行舟

江湖岁月
笔墨春秋
峻岭落日
溯流行舟


Sail Against The Current

Years in lakes and rivers
Spring and autumn of the brush and ink
The setting sun in the steep mountain
Sail against the current

11/8/2018对联体 ● 四绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Four Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7265首对联体诗
The7,265th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2018-11-25 14:41 | 显示全部楼层
美好时光

蝉噪竹林君点赞
酒香杏苑月光临
一园梅雨行香子
十里荷塘虞美人


The Fine Time

Cicadas noising in the bamboo forest
you gave the thumbs-up
The wine aromas in the apricot garden
moon was present

The Beauty Yu
ten miles of the lotus pool
The Xingxiangzi
the plum rain in a garden

11/24/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-12-6 13:18 | 显示全部楼层
親友

夜深書月韻
道遠盼鄉親
松竹梅三友
智仁勇一身


Relatives And Friends

In the deep evening
write the rhymes of moon
On the distant way
look forward to people from the same village

Pine, bamboo and plum — three friends
wisdom, kindheartedness and bravery — in one body

12/5/2018對聯體 ● 五絕羅志海著譯
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Five Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7426首對聯體詩
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-12-21 11:08 | 显示全部楼层
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春夏风光

荷香十里迷君醉
竹影千竿摇水清
片片飞花春渐远
滴滴落雨夏初萌


Scenery In Spring And Summer

Aromas of the lotus blossoms in ten miles
intoxicated you

Shook the water clear
a thousand poles of the shadows of the bamboos

Every flying flower
the spring was far away gradually

Drops of the fallen rain
the summer first sprouting

12/20/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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The 7,509th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-1-3 14:37 | 显示全部楼层
诗酒记忆


青山堪纵酒
红叶好题诗
雨点伤心处
龙行涨水时


Memory Of Poetry And Wine

The red leaves can be inscribed a poem
The green mountain can excessive drinking
Rain pointed the sad place
Dragons soared when the water rising

1/2/2019对联体 ● 五绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Five Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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The 7,600th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-1-13 05:50 | 显示全部楼层
青春亮丽

豪赌青春牌一把
静观俗世梦三更
风摇烛影心孤寂
树挂冰灯物澈明


Youthful Beauty

Unrestrained gambling youth
with a handful of cards
Silent to watch the earthly world
at the midnight

Wind shook shadows of candles
my heart was lonely
Trees hanged the ice lamps
things were limpid and bright

1/12/2019对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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The 7,648th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-3-14 06:42 | 显示全部楼层
迷恋

一世腐迂吟古韵
半生潦倒写愁情
碧湖眷恋荷裙袂
香气痴迷蝶眼睛


Infatuation

In half a lifetime of frustrations
he wrote the sad mind

In a generation of the pedant
he chanted the ancient rhymes

The green lake loves skirts of the lotus blossoms
The aromas obsessed eyes of the butterflies

3/13/2019格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8124首对联体诗
The 8,14th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-3-21 15:04 | 显示全部楼层
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千古爱情

江流缓缓,千古江流千古月
烟雨浓浓,六朝烟雨六朝风
暮暮朝朝,行间字里远春梦
卿卿我我,月下花前浓爱情


The Eternal Love

A river slow to flows
the river is eternal
the moon is eternal

Smoke and rain are thick
smoke and rain of the Six Dynasties
wind of the Six Dynasties

Night and day
among the words and between the lines
the spring dream is far away

Whispers of love
below the moon and before the flowers
the thick love

3/20/2019格律体新诗 ● 十一绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8143首对联体诗
The 8,143th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-5-22 06:38 | 显示全部楼层
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家國情懷


氣魄非凡,行為儒雅才郎範
身姿漫妙,體態輕靈少女情
山河壯麗,無限妖嬈妍景色
社會和諧,萬千幸福大家庭


注:第一三句錢永德作,第二四句羅志海作。



Feelings Of Country And Families

Extraordinary spirit
behave in a refined manner
a model of the talented husband
Posture is wonderful
brisk posture
the young girl’s emotion

Magnificent mountains and rivers
infinite enchanting
the beautiful scenery
Sociall harmony
thousands of the big families are happy

Note: first and third sentences by. Qian Yongde
Second and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.

5/21/2019格律體新詩 ● 十一絕 羅志海譯
Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第8495首對聯體詩
The 8,495th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-7-8 20:54 | 显示全部楼层
漸臻佳境

喳喳燕語庭前樹
鬱鬱鵑啼苑外花
微染蓮香生畫筆
橫吹竹笛到天涯


Becoming A Better Place Gradually

Swallows twittered in the tree in front of courtyard
Cuckoos soundedsadly in the flowers outside the garden
I micro-dyed lotus fragrance with a painting brush
I played a bamboo flute transversely entered the horizon

7/6/2019格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8676首對聯體詩
The 8,676th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-8-5 06:00 | 显示全部楼层
遊歷

品茗花前思葉落
舉杯月下誦離騷
臥聽四海風濤急
行看五山松浪滔


Toured

Lifting a cup below the moon, I recited Lisao
Tasting tea before the flowers, I thought of the fallen leaves

Walked and saw the pine billows surging in Five Mountains
Lied and listened to wind and waves swift in Four Seas

8/4/2019格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8867首對聯體詩
The 8,867th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-9-4 06:07 | 显示全部楼层
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天地

露寒怜月小
霜重怨秋深
踏雪天行健
凌云地势坤


Universe And World

I pitied moon small, dew was  cold
I blamed autumn late, frost was heavy

Stepping on the snow, the universe keeps running
Reaching clouds, gentlemen live in the world not stopping

9/3/2019格律体新诗 ● 五绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Five Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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The 9,011th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-10-4 06:31 | 显示全部楼层
豪情

韵寄东风,愧对桃花藏拙笔
君观北斗,笑同明月醉瑶琴
中流击水,伏波横海英雄胆
长啸仰天,蔽日干云壮志心


Lofty Sentiments

You watched the Big Dipper
Smiling with the bright moon
to be drunk into yao lute
Sent rhymes to the easterly
shy to the peach flowers
I hid my writing brush

Hit midstream water
subdued waves and outrageous to sea
the heroic courage
Long crying to the sky
covered up the sun and went straight to the skies
an ambition heart

10/3/2019格律体新诗 ● 十一绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9135首对联体诗
The 9,135th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-12-16 19:29 | 显示全部楼层
情感流露  

情于深处伤秋泣
酒到酣时舞剑狂
寂寂空庭花弄月
声声艳曲凤求凰


Emotional Disclosure

Love in the depth is sad and weeps for autumn
Drinking still being drunk and wield a sword crazily

In the silent and empty courtyard, flowers play moon
In the sounds of the romantic music, phoenixes in courtship


12/15/2019格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
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The 9,204th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2019-12-23 06:10 | 显示全部楼层
人来客去  

云间翠岭,松庐偶纳慕名客
月下幽篁,竹舍常临过路人
花簇锦团,如意吉祥人益寿
莺歌燕舞,平安富贵客迎春


Passerby Come And Guests Go

The bamboo cottage often greets passerby
in a secluded and restful bamboo grove below the moon
The pine cottage occasionally accepts guests who have come, attracted by its fame

Flower clusters like brocades
good luck and people add longevity
Orioles singing and swallows dancing
peace and wealth, guests greet spring

12/22/2019格律体新诗 ● 十一绝罗志海著译
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第9229首对联体诗
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 楼主| 发表于 2019-12-28 17:22 | 显示全部楼层
冬春晨晚

傍晚湖边竹影晃
清晨枝上鹊声呼
冰心铁骨冬梅傲
杏眼柳眉春意舒


Morning And Evening In Winter And Spring

In the evening, the bamboo shadows on the lakeside are shaking
In the morning, the magpies on the branches are shouting

With ice hearts and iron bones, the winter plums pride
The spring mood is comfoutable with willow eyebrows and apricot eyes

12/27/2019格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9254首对联体诗
The 9,254th Two Pairs of Couplets

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 楼主| 发表于 2020-3-12 20:16 | 显示全部楼层
无拘无束

一夏喧哗吹柳瘦
满腔愤怒转头空
放怀情寄红尘外
信步身临紫陌中


Remain Free

It’s empty when turning around full of anger
Noise in a summer blows to the thin willows
Let us express our feelings to the world of mortals
We are strolling on the purple road

3/12/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9647首对联体诗
The 9,647th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内有几十位诗人参与创作。
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-17 08:07 | 显示全部楼层
淡薄情懷

多情最是庭前月
灑脫莫如天外雲
放棄功名歸綠野
保留傲骨別紅塵


The Weak Feeling

Free and easy as the clouds outside the sky
The most passionate thing is the moon in front of the courtyard
Give up your fame and fortune and return to the green field
Keep your pride and farewell to the red dust

4/16/2020格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9893首對聯體詩
The 9,893th Two Pairs of Couplets

後記:
對聯體詩遵循《對聯體詩律則(草稿)》寫作,每一句字數由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(絕句),是一種格律體新詩。目前國內已有幾十位詩人參與創作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
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 楼主| 发表于 2020-4-24 16:52 | 显示全部楼层
美女与英雄

春风摇晃,浅紫一池盈水岸
秋雨飘零,乱红几点满苔阶
美女情怀,孤香傲雪梅风骨
英雄气概,双蕊凌霜菊气节


Beauty And Hero

The spring breeze shakes
the shallow purple in a pond
overflowing the water bank
The autumn rain is falling
a few red in a mess
full on the mossy steps

Emotion of a beauty
lonely fragrance is proud to snow
the strength of character of the plum blossom
Heroic spirit
double pistils to frost
the aura of the chrysanthemum

4/23/2020格律体新诗 ● 十一绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Eleven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9948首对联体诗
The 9,948th Two Pairs of Couplets

后记:
对联体诗遵循《对联体诗律则(草稿)》写作,每一句字数由三言至二十一言不等,共四句(绝句),是一种格律体新诗。目前国内已有几十位诗人参与创作。
Postscript:
    Two Pairs of Couplets is written in accordance with The Rule Of Two Pairs Of Couplets (Draft). The number of words in each sentence varies from three words to twenty-one words. There are four sentences (quatrains) in total. It is a kind of new poetry in the style of rhyme.
At present, dozens of poets have participated in the creation in China.
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 8-70659d9c3f8c.html
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