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发表于 2018-4-3 20:32 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 罗志海 于 2018-4-10 04:59 编辑

今天201832农历戊戌年(狗年)正月十五元宵节,值此吉日良时,罗志海创立了对联体诗群,邀请各位捧场助阵。本群每一周都有写对联体诗的群作业。欢迎你写对联体诗,向群主罗志海投稿,由罗志海统一收稿点评。择优翻译成英文,在中文巜诗词在线》网站,英文巜poemhunter.com》网站及国内一两个网站上发表。

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 楼主| 发表于 2018-4-3 20:34 | 显示全部楼层
本周群作业通知1

▲        主题:仲春。其他主题也可以。
▲        格式:对联体诗,以五绝七绝为主。其他九绝十绝等绝句无任欢迎。
▲        要署上作者姓名(或网名),文责自负。诗稿请贴在对联体诗群(或汕尾市楹联学会群)(或汕尾诗社群)(或海丰诗词社群)里,也可投至罗志海微信。由罗志海统一收稿点评,择优翻译成英语,在中文《诗词在线》网站、英文《poemhunter.com》网站及国内一两个网站上发表。
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-4-3 20:35 | 显示全部楼层
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▲        主题:贤母良妻。其他主题也可以。
▲        格式:对联体诗,以五绝七绝为主。其他九绝十绝等绝句无任欢迎。
▲        要署上作者姓名(或网名),文责自负。诗稿请贴在对联体诗群(或海丰诗词社群)里,诗稿下端请添注“投稿2”三字。也可投至罗志海微信。由罗志海统一收稿点评,择优翻译成英语,在中文《诗词在线》网站、英文《poemhunter.com》网站及国内一两个网站上发表。
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2018年3月18日通知
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黄垂塔《仲春》(对联体五律)
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明月《感冒》(七绝)
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https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/caught-a-cold/
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施美江《仲春》(对联体五绝)
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-4-3 20:36 | 显示全部楼层
本周群作业通知3

▲        主题:无题。其他主题也可以。
▲        格式:对联体诗三绝。其他九绝十绝等绝句无任欢迎。
▲        要署上作者姓名(或网名),文责自负。诗稿请贴在对联体诗群(或海丰诗词社群)里,诗稿下端请添注“作业3”三字。也可投至罗志海微信。由罗志海统一收稿点评,择优翻译成英语,在中文《诗词在线》网站、英文《poemhunter.com》网站及国内一两个网站上发表。
▲        想加入对联体诗群的微信诗友请加罗志海微信。罗志海手机号码18219067691
2018年3月25日通知
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http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/white-sheep-wine/
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... c-716439168208.html
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-phoenix-ridge/
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 3-bf2589ce6501.html
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https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/buddha-s-fragrant-tea/
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 0-ea6bf309a147.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/-a-night-luminescent-pearl/
▲ 上周群作业完成一览——
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https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/praise-my-wife/
24楼
http://www.hkscxh.net/forum.php? ... ;extra=#pid17404466
卢木荣《母爱》(对联体七绝)
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 1-fc46383f94d3.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-mother-s-love-3/
159楼
http://swsm.net/forum.php?mod=vi ... id%3D328&page=9
卢木荣《贈妻》(对联体七绝)
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https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/send-to-my-wife/
121楼
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黄垂塔《夫妇情》(对联体五律)
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https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/love-of-the-couple-2/
143楼
http://bbs.zhsc.net/forum.php?mo ... amp;page=5#lastpost
柯宜超《祭母亲》(对联体五排律)
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 7-c74ae88e8e0e.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... mony-for-my-mother/
38楼
http://www.hkscxh.net/forum.php? ... p;extra=&page=2
卢木荣《路上吟》(对联体七绝)
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https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/chant-on-the-road/
184楼
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卢木荣《無題》(对联体七绝)
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https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/no-title-91/
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曾劍之《學會時事》(对联体七绝)
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https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... he-learned-society/
54楼
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振波浪清《半盞秋》(对联体五绝)
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62楼
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卢木荣《近清明》(对联体七绝)
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https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/near-the-tomb-sweeping-day
131楼
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https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... at-the-spring-dawn/
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-4-3 20:37 | 显示全部楼层
本周群作业通知4

▲        主题:壮志。其他主题也可以。
▲        格式:对联体诗四绝。其他九绝十绝等绝句无任欢迎。
▲        要署上作者姓名(或网名),文责自负。诗稿请贴在对联体诗群(或海丰诗词社群)里,诗稿下端请添注“作业4”三字。也可投至罗志海微信。由罗志海统一收稿点评,择优翻译成英语,在中文《诗词在线》网站、英文《poemhunter.com》网站及国内一两个网站上发表。
▲        想加入对联体诗群的微信诗友请加罗志海微信。罗志海手机号码18219067691
2018年4月1日通知
相关链接http://bbs.zhsc.net/thread-6059120-1-1.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... in-a-hundred-years/
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 6-4a5f26afdead.html
89楼
http://www.swsm.net/forum.php?mo ... id%3D328&page=5
109楼
http://bbs.zhsc.net/forum.php?mo ... ;page=4#pid52794717
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-cloud-and-gully/
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 1-809db13b980f.html
64楼http://bbs.zhsc.net/thread-5849201-3-1.html
86楼http://bbs.zhsc.net/thread-5849201-3-1.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-intoxicating-wind/
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 5-7c032b971143.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/oblique-wind/
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柯宜超《春之韵》(对联体三律)
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 7-788176aa2935.html
庄泽洪《有感》(对联体七绝)
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霜海花开《梦飞》(对联体七绝)
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卢木荣《無題二》(对联体五绝)
183楼
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叶叶新《春分》(对联体五绝)
187楼
http://bbs.zhsc.net/forum.php?mo ... amp;page=7#lastpost
叶叶新《夢妹》(对联体五绝)
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/dreamt-a-girl/
28楼
罗志海任春芝《謝娘心》(对联体十一绝)
126楼
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柯宜超《蓮花仙茶》(七绝)
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... s-blossom-mountain/
罗志海霜海花开《人到中年》(对联体七绝)
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罗志海霜海花开《绽》(对联体三绝)
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/bloom-of/
庄泽洪《春之韵》(对联体三绝)
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振波浪清罗志海《挈妇将雏》(对联体七绝)
82楼
http://www.hkscxh.net/forum.php? ... p;extra=&page=3
叶叶新《花魁》(对联体三绝)
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-4-8 15:08 | 显示全部楼层

本周群作业通知5

▲        主题:戈壁滩。其他主题也可以。
▲        格式:对联体诗五绝。其他九绝十绝等绝句无任欢迎。
▲        要署上作者姓名(或网名),文责自负。诗稿请贴在对联体诗群(或海丰诗词社群)(或汕尾诗社群)里,诗稿下端请添注“作业5”三字。也可投至罗志海微信。由罗志海统一收稿点评,择优翻译成英语,在中文《诗词在线》网站、英文《poemhunter.com》网站及国内一两个网站上发表。
▲        想加入对联体诗群的微信诗友请加罗志海微信。罗志海手机号码18219067691
2018年4月8日通知
▲相关链接http://bbs.zhsc.net/thread-6059120-1-1.html
▲ 上周群作业完成一览——
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施美江《三江湿地春行》(对联体七绝)
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施美江《冬日赏梅》(对联体七绝)
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叶叶新《夏》(对联体七律)44楼
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叶叶新《春》(对联体七律)
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乐逍遥罗志海《红霞》(对联体三绝)36楼
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叶叶新《冬》(对联体四律)
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-4-10 05:11 | 显示全部楼层

请你也来写一写对联体诗,好吗?
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-4-18 00:09 | 显示全部楼层

本周群作业通知6

▲        主题:奋进。其他主题也可以。
▲        格式:对联体诗六绝。其他九绝十绝等绝句无任欢迎。
▲        要署上作者姓名(或网名),文责自负。诗稿请贴在对联体诗群(或海丰诗词
社群)(或汕尾诗社群)(或海陆诗联群)(或汕尾诗联群)里,诗稿下端请添注“作业6”三字。也可投至罗志海微信。由罗志海统一收稿点评,择优翻译成英语,在中文《诗词在线》网站、英文《poemhunter.com》网站及国内一两个网站上发表。
▲        想加入对联体诗群的微信诗友请加罗志海微信。罗志海手机号码18219067691
2018年4月18日通知
▲相关链接http://bbs.zhsc.net/thread-6059120-1-1.html
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... b-e6a71140a07e.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/below-the-moonlight/
http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/deep-and-tender/
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 0-b75fda12c0cd.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/romantic-loves/
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卢木荣《無題三》(对联体七绝)
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罗志海振波浪清《群岭》(对联体五绝)
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/groups-of-ridges/
钱永德《月夜独行》(对联体五绝)50楼
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振波浪清罗志海《归帆》(对联体五绝)
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发表于 2018-4-18 12:49 | 显示全部楼层
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-4-25 15:06 | 显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 罗志海 于 2021-2-3 17:44 编辑

美景如画

昨夜风流云戏月
今晨浪漫友骑鲸
荷花柔美柳梢翠
兰韵幽香春意盈

写诗感言:亲爱的诗友们,你们在网络这个大舞台,与罗志海互动,写作对联体诗。在空间,在微信,在QQ里,多处留下了对联体诗的身影。你们是我的老师,同时也是我的学生。我们互为师生。谢谢你一路走来,陪伴我写作了5800首对联体诗。我们同时进步了,成长了,快乐了!我在祖国南海之滨,遥祝您工作顺利!祝您阖家幸福平安!谢谢你们的大力支持!


The Beautiful Scenery Like A Picture

Last night wind flowed
clouds made fun of moon
This morning rising waves
my friend rode a whale

The lotus blossoms are tender and beautiful
the willow tips are emerald
The orchid rhyme is delicate fragrant
the spring mood is plentiful

The Idea And Expression Of Writing Poems: My dear poetic friends, you interacted with Luo Zhihai on the network stage and wrote couplet poems.In space, in WeChat and in QQ, many places left the figures of couplet poems. You are my teachers and simultaneously are my students. We are teachers and students each other. Thank you! Accompanied me in writing 5,800 couplet poems. We are improving at the same time, growing up, happy! I wish you success in your work at the shore of the South China Sea! I wish you a happy and safe family! Thank you for your strong support!

4/24/2018对联体诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Couplet Poem ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第5800首对联体诗
The 5,800th Couplet Poem
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-4-29 06:49 | 显示全部楼层

本周群作业通知7

▲        群主用来微信的ipad坏了很多天,刚修理好。未能及时批改作业为歉。
▲        主题:五月。其他主题也可以。
▲        格式:对联体诗七绝。其他九绝十绝等绝句无任欢迎。
要署上作者姓名(或网名),文责自负。诗稿请贴在对联体诗群里,诗稿下端请添注“作业7”三字。也可投至罗志海微信。由罗志海统一收稿点评,择优翻译成英语,在中文《诗词在线》网站、英文《poemhunter.com》网站及国内一两个网站上发表。
▲2018年4月29日通知
▲相关链接http://bbs.zhsc.net/thread-6059120-1-1.html
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-5-4 22:06 | 显示全部楼层


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 楼主| 发表于 2018-5-5 21:35 | 显示全部楼层

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▲        主题:江水。其他主题也可以。
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也可以写对联,由罗志海撰写另一副对联,合成对联体诗。要署上作者姓名(或网名),文责自负。诗稿联稿请贴在对联体诗群里,诗稿下端请添注“作业8”三字。也可投至罗志海微信。由罗志海统一收稿点评,择优翻译成英语,在中文《诗词在线》网站、英文《poemhunter.com》网站及国内一两个网站上发表。
▲2018年5月5日通知
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曾向家陈轩葵《题故乡老屋》(对联体七绝)
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-5-10 07:14 | 显示全部楼层
意想不到

红杏出墙谁见证
闷雷会意电嚣张
一帘幽梦随风远
两地相思伴夜长


Beat All

The red apricot out from the wall
who witnessed?
The dull thunder understanding
the lightning was arrogant

A curtain of the elegant dreams
were far away with wind
Two places of the lovesickness
accompanied the long evening

5/9/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第5900首对联体诗
The 5,900th Two Pairs of Couplets
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-5-12 07:27 | 显示全部楼层

本周群作业通知9

▲        主题:母爱。其他主题也可以。
▲        格式:对联体诗九绝。其他十绝十一绝等绝句无任欢迎。如写不出对联体诗,
也可以写对联,由罗志海撰写另一副对联,合成对联体诗。要署上作者姓名(或网名),文责自负。诗稿联稿请贴在对联体诗群里,诗稿下端请添注“作业9”三字。也可投至罗志海微信。由罗志海统一收稿点评,择优翻译成英语,在中文《诗词在线》网站、英文《poemhunter.com》网站及国内一两个网站上发表。
▲2018年5月12日通知
▲相关链接http://bbs.zhsc.net/thread-6059120-1-1.html
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... f-04f3bce6ce7e.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/chrysanthemums-of-the-east-fence/
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 2-2e8dc0bcbfc6.html
117楼http://bbs.zhsc.net/thread-5889436-4-1.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/sing-folk-songs-at-night/
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https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... ue-with-my-friends/
振波浪清罗志海《画面》(对联体十一绝)174楼
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http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 9-67e97b97c5d2.html
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https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/aesthetic-moods/
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http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 5-d1cdaa195c70.html
叶叶新《書中人生》(对联体七律)
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/life-in-the-books/
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http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... e-22c766d22fd2.html
卢木荣《夏晨》(对联体七绝)
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-summer-morning/
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罗志海钱永德《仙賢獨尊》(对联体八绝)
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http://www.swsm.net/thread-422589-16-1.html
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http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 3-cf65695b7457.html
罗志海钱永德《逸然若仙》(对联体六绝)
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... ent-as-an-immortal/
钱永德罗志海《超脱世俗》(对联体七绝)172楼
http://bbs.zhsc.net/forum.php?mo ... amp;page=6#lastpost
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http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 9-8c47eee5a9b1.html
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 楼主| 发表于 2018-5-19 06:52 | 显示全部楼层

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▲        主题:英雄。其他主题也可以。
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诗,也可以写对联,一句两句均可以,然后由罗志海撰写另一副对联,合成对联体诗。要署上作者姓名(或网名),文责自负。诗稿联稿请贴在对联体诗群里,诗稿下端请添注“作业10”字样。也可投至罗志海微信。由罗志海统一收稿点评,择优翻译成英语,在中文《诗词在线》网站、英文《poemhunter.com》网站及国内一两个网站上发表。
▲2018年5月19日通知
▲相关链接http://bbs.zhsc.net/thread-6059120-1-1.html
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https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/infatuation-52/
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... c-b43c904b4f5a.html
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-bad-water/
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/open-the-past-2/
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https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/tour-guilin-and-yangshuo/
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http://bbs.zhsc.net/forum.php?mo ... amp;page=6#lastpost
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http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 0-8c2341e351b5.html
振波浪清罗志海《清平世界》(对联体七绝)
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-time-of-peace-and-order/
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http://www.hkscxh.net/forum.php? ... p;extra=&page=9
钱永德罗志海《國泰民安》(对联体十一绝)
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 1-028f3bdc1769.html
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https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/wise-courage-wins-heaven/
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http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... 7-e8917c0a868c.html
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https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/solemn-and-stirring/
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佳肴玉液美人计
巧语花言名利关
两岸春风拂柳絮
一瓢泉水洗尘烦


See Through The Dust World

Good wine and delicacies
the honey-trap
The pass of the fame and wealth
a specious style of speech

On both shores, the spring breeze
blows the willow catkins
A gourd ladle of spring water
washes the dust annoyance

5/22/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第6000首对联体诗
The 6,000th Two Pairs of Couplets
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诗钟七格:梅竹雨雷
Seven Forms Of The Poem Clock: The Plum, Bamboo, Rain And Thunder



【一】凤顶格:

梅花映雪千山秀
竹韵疏风万里香
雨阵摆明掀巨浪
雷声显赫聚瞿塘

【1】Phoenix Head Form:

The plum blossoms reflected snow
a thousand mountains were pretty
The bamboo rhymes and the sparse wind
ten thousand miles of fragrance

The rain array stated
lifting a huge wave
The thunder sounds illustriously
in the Qu Pond got together



【二】燕颔格:

落梅一片化鴻泥
泣竹千年著孝風
暴雨挾冰雲暗淡
闷雷帶霧月朦朧

【2】Swallow Neck Form:

A piece of the fallen lotus blossom
became a claw seal
left by a hung bird on the slime
Cried bamboos in a thousand years
were dressed in the filial piety wind

Rainstorm mixed ice
clouds were faint
Muffled thunders with fog
moon was dim



【三】鸢肩格:

雪舞梅粧君作赋
风邀竹律我吟诗
星离雨散纷纷泪
电闪雷鸣振振词

【3】Kite Shoulder Form:

Snow danced and plums made up
you wrote lyrics
Wind invited bamboos rhymes
I chanted pomes

Stars separated and rain scattered
tears one after another
What one said was plausible
lightning and thunder



【四】蜂腰格:

杜酒浸梅酣興好
雅詩潤竹妙文高
春淋甘雨山川美
秋響輕雷雲水遙

【4】Bee Waist Form:

Du Wine soaking plums
good intoxication
The elegant poetry
moistening bamboos
the wonderful article is brilliant

In the spring
the timely rain sheds
mountains are pretty
In the autumn
the light thunders sound
clouds and water are distant



【五】鹤膝格:

群芳最羡梅君秀
众草先知竹韵清
伴梦淅淅雨点泼
惊春隐隐雷公鸣

【5】Crane Knee Form:

Numerous grass first knows
the bamboo rhymes clear
All kinds of flowers
mostly envy the Plum King pretty

Accompanied dreams
raindrops down poured pattering
Scared spring
thunders sounded indistinct



【六】凫胫格:

東風暗約寒梅笑
北陸閑將翠竹彈
西部夏天千雨熱
南方冬日數雷寒

【6】Duck Leg Form:

The east wind agrees on stealthily
the cold plum flowers smile
In the north land
play the emerald green bamboos leisurely

In the westward
a thousand rains are hot
in summer
In the south
a few thunders are cold
in winter



【七】雁足格:

秋天砍伐湘妃竹
春季嬌羞綠萼梅
夏日廬山留客雨
冬宵廣場鑽天雷

【7】Wild Goose Foot Form:

In autumn
lop Xiangfei Bamboos
In spring
shame of the green armeniaca mumes

In the winter evening
on the square
a Thunder Drilled Sky
In the summer days
in the Lushan Mountain
the rain asking a guest to stay


注:第一二句任春芝作,第三四句罗志海作。
Note: first and second sentences by Ren Chunzhi.
Third and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.
5/22-23/2018对联体 ● 七绝罗志海译
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第6001-6007首对联体诗
The 6,001th-6,007 Two Pairs of Couplets
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以后,有哪位诗友想探讨合写对联体诗,想加入这个《罗志海霜海花开陈轩葵钱永德对联诗》群,须提出申请,经群主批准方可加入。
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诗钟七格:柳桃路桥
Seven Forms Of The Poem Clock: The Willow, Peach, Road And Bridge



【一】凤顶格:

柳絮飘飞天地美
桃仁活跃胃肠康
路长人困思将睡
桥阔舟轻驶正忙

【1】Phoenix Head Form:

The willow catkins fluttering and flying
the heaven and earth are beautiful
The stomach and intestine are health
the peach kernels are active

On the long road
persons were tired
thought to sleep
Under the wide bridge
a boat light driven busily



【二】燕颔格:

诗钟七格:柳桃路桥之二燕颔格

青柳暮昏诗意媚
粉桃晨晓款情浓
小桥流水依人鸟
山路丛林傲雪松

【2】Swallow Neck Form:

The green willows
at dusk
the poetic mood is charming
The pink peach
at dawn
the true feeling is thick

The small bridge
the flowing water
birds leaning on the people
The mountain road
the jungle
pines showing disdain for the snow



【三】鸢肩格:

花明柳暗婀娜處
李白桃紅嫵媚時
景美路深遊客攘
江清橋闊錦鱗髭

【3】Kite Shoulder Form:

The flowers bright
the willows dark
the graceful place
The plums white
the peaches red
the charming time

The scenery beautiful
the road long
tourists bustling
The river clear
the bridge wide
the cryprinus carpiod moustaches



【四】蜂腰格:

株株烟柳山川美
粒粒仙桃云水遥
两座小桥接汉水
一条山路上重霄

【4】Bee Waist Form:

One by one the smoky willows
mountains and rivers are beautiful
Pieces of the fairy peaches
clouds and water are remote

Two small bridges
connected the Hanshui Water
Went to the heavens
one mountain road



【五】鹤膝格:

尺壁寸阴桃韵亮
成春着手柳条扬
游园赏景路宽广
渡水翻江桥坦长

【5】Crane Knee Form:

Time is more expensive than jade
the peach rhymes are bright
A hand with spring
the willow withes flutter

Tour garden and enjoy scenery
the road is broad
The bridge is flat and long
across water and turn over river



【六】凫胫格:

东去遍植杨柳树
南来闲享李桃园
寻花览胜过桥去
赴港观鱼顺路延

【6】Duck Leg Form:

Went to east
everywhere planted poplars and willows
Came to south
enjoyed plum and peach garden leisurely

Look for flowers
over the bridge
toured scenery

Arrived the harbor
along the way
watched fish



【七】雁足格:

春臨野岸綠楊柳
雨潤果園紅李桃
芳草如茵鋪小路
遊人似織過溪橋

【7】Wild Goose Foot Form:

Spring arrives the wild shore
green poplars and willows
Rain moistens the orchard
red plums and peaches

A carpet of fragrant grass
spread a small road
Visitors like weaving
pass on the stream bridge

注:第一二句罗志海作,第三四句钱永德作。
Note: first and second sentences by Luo Zhihai.
Third and fourth sentences by Qian Yongde.
5/24-25/2018對聯體 ● 七絕羅志海譯
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第6021-6027首對聯體詩
The 6,021-6,027th Two Pairs of Couplets


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本周群作业通知11

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千古奇緣

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日照銀瓶人戀花香思語綿綿雲伴月,日月同輝一片天,何時日月同輝映,卿卿我我憶當年

注:第一二句錢永德作,第三句塞外雪影作,第四句羅志海作。


Curious Fate Of Thousands Of Ancient Times

In the vast West Lake the evening mist is dim
the clear waves ripple a gaily-painted pleasure-boat floats
in the same storm-tossed boat become attached to
moods of handsome boys and fair maidens still thick
in the Red Tower fondle each other, the spring is infinite

In the temple of life strong fragrance
The auspicious fog is dense around the Golden Palace
yin and yang in the same dream inhabit in the sycamore
beautiful ladies and king’s love unfinished
in the moon pleasure wings dance lightly forever

In the sea surge the golden waves
cranes dance with the sails
feelings light in the mountain smoke rises
sea and smoke bathe together with three praises
in that land sea and smoke bathe and play together
sweet as honey have got our wishes

Sun shines the Silver Pot Mountain
people infatuation of flower fragrance
the missing words continuous clouds accompany moon
sun and moon shine together in a same sky
what time will sun and moon shine together
lovers will talk about those years

Note: first and second sentences by Qian Yongde.
Third sentence by Saiwaixueying.
Fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.

6/3/2018對聯體 ● 三十六絕 羅志海譯
Couplet Poem ● Thirty-six Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第6100首對聯體詩
The 6,100th Couplet Poem
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本周群作业通知12

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雨中莲
Lotus In Rain
诗钟七格(嵌字格)
Seven Forms Of The Poem Clock(Insert Forms):


【一】凤顶格:

雨灑瀟瀟珠串舞
蓮鉤滴滴淚漣漪
苞含嫩蕊千花萼
水泊寒風萬柳絲

【1】Phoenix Head Form:

Sprinkled rain whistling and pattering
pearls stringed and danced

The lotus feet of beauty
drops of tears rippling

Buds contain tender pistils
a thousand calyxes

The cold wind anchors
ten thousand willow withes

【二】燕颔格:

夢雨晶簾霑霈澤
心蓮華幕濯薰香
懷柔吐豔風中舞
擁翠搖姿水裏央

【2】Swallow Neck Form:

The dream rain
the glittering curtains
soak up the land

The heart lotus blossom
a magnificent curtain
wash in fragrance

With tenderness
dances in the wind
being gorgeous

Hugging emerald
shakes its posture
in the middle of water

【三】鸢肩格:

漫天雨幕絲絲淚
媚水蓮花朵朵雲
奉倩調妝風嫋娜
霽氛含韻月垂薰

【3】Kite Shoulder Form:

All over the sky
silks of tears
the rain curtain

The charming water
the lotus flowers
the pieces of clouds

To be in good condition
makeup
wind is graceful and slender

The fresh air after the rain
fragrance with rhymes
moon comes down

【四】蜂腰格:

欣逢霁雨云天朗
喜赏香莲画舫移
玉叶摇钱伊水漾
琼葩绽蕊丽风驰

【4】Bee Waist Form:

Joyful to meet
after the rain
the windy sky is clearness

Happy to enjoy
the gaily painted pleasure boat moves
the fragrant lotus

The jade leaves
shake money
ripples the Yishui River

The jade-white flowers
in bloom
the pretty wind gallops

【五】鹤膝格:

凌波仙子雨衣舞
寝梦芳颜莲脸羞
寄意酣红开晓露
沉吟凝锦画春楼

【5】Crane Knee Form:

A fairy
walking over ripples
the raincoat dancing

The fragrant looks
the shy lotus face
sleep in dream

Places its mood
on soundly red
blooms in the dawn dews

In meditate
paints the spring building
gazes brocade

【六】凫胫格:

有梦罗裙欣雨露
相思玉佩喜莲蓬
娟娟姿质轻轻意
潋潋湖光面面风

【6】Duck Leg Form:

With a dream the silk skirt
rain and dews are joyfully

A lovesick jade plate
the seedpod of the lotus is happy

The lovely natural endowments
the light feeling

Rippling light of lake
four sites of wind

【七】雁足格:

草徑婆娑青竹雨
池塘錦繡紫金蓮
浮香繞曲蛙蟬唱
解意纏綿魚水顛

【7】Wild Goose Foot Form:

On the grass path
rain of the green bamboos
whirling

In the pond
a purple lotus is beautiful

Floating fragrance
music curling up
frogs and cicadas are singing

Understanding and charming
fish and water are joyful

6/6/2018对联体 ● 七绝 叶叶新著,罗志海译
Couplet Poem ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Ye Yexin
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第6121-6127首对联体诗
The 6,121-6,127th Couplet Poem
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景幽

荡舟远水鱼跃
飞雁长空客愁
风定花犹坠落
云闲月更静幽


Quiet Scenery

Row a boat
in the remote water
fish are jumping

Swallows fly
in the vast sky
passengers are grieves

Wind stops
flowers fall down still

Moon is more quiet
clouds are leisurely

6/14/2018对联体 ● 六绝罗志著译
海Two Pairs of Couplets ● Six Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第6200首对联体诗
The 6,200th Two Pairs of Couplets
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明志

淩波紫燕銜春色
戲水青蛙唱夏歌
家業雖貧仍淡泊
柳條尤弱卻婀娜


Show My Aspiration

The purple swallows skimming waves
bite the spring colours

The frogs playing water
sing songs of summer

Although my family is poor
I am indifferent still

The willow withes are especially weak
but they are gracefully

6/27/2018對聯體 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第6300首對聯體詩
The 6,300th Two Pairs of Couplets
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