玩转人生

罗志海

玩转人生


姑且玩玩看
不妨默默听
痴顽成性今难改
闲逸缠身永不停

格律体新诗 ● 罗志海著译
第2首五七绝对联体诗 2021年2月3日

注:谢谢并回复竹外疏枝诗友赐教。


Play Through Life

Let's have fun tentatively
There is no harm in listen in silence
Carefree and never stop
Now it's hard to change the stubborn nature

Note: Thank and reply my poetry friend, Zhuwaishuzhi’s advice

Metric New Poetry by Luo Zhihai, 2/3/2021
The 2th Five-Seven Words of Quatrain of Two Pairs of Couplets

龚素文

小诗别出心裁，激赞

龚素文

复赏学习，读之受益，谢您佳篇，问好

罗志海

龚素文 发表于 2021-2-5 11:47
复赏学习，读之受益，谢您佳篇，问好

谢谢诗友点评,下午好!

罗志海

龚素文 发表于 2021-2-4 11:17
小诗别出心裁，激赞

谢谢诗友点评,下午好!

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构思精致，结构自然，语炼形丰，韵味悠长。

陈何兰

运笔自如，谋篇有序，描写传神，精炼有致，遣词达意，耐人咀嚼。

陈何兰

运笔自如，谋篇有序，描写传神，精炼有致，遣词达意，耐人咀嚼。

陈何兰

立意好，造句新颖，精工稳切，回味绵长。

蓝荷

笔法老道，遣词流畅。造句新颖，精工稳切，回味绵长。

蓝荷

笔法老道，遣词流畅。造句新颖，精工稳切，回味绵长。

罗志海

五七绝对联体诗
罗志海 / 文

刚刚14:22，午睡醒来，想到，绝句是四句，每一句的字数是相等的。为什么不可以是长短句呢？长短句也就变成词了。
我想写长短句，就叫五七绝对联体诗吧。

2021年2月3日14:22-14：40


Five-Seven Words Of Quatrains Of Two Pares Of Couplets
by Luo Zhihai

Just at 14:22, I woke up from a nap and thought that quatrains are four sentences, and the number of words in each sentence is equal. Why not long and short sentences? Long and short sentences become lyrics.
If I want to write long and short sentences, it's called the Five-Seven Words of Quatrain of Two Pairs of Couplets.

Beijing Time 20:50-21:00,2/3/2021 Transalted

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愿吉祥安康，祝福老师除夕快乐！