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郑贤永

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罗志海

梦幻

梨花落后山峰醉
曲调飞时杨柳痴
月洒床前秋入梦
枫燃坡上雁题词


Reverie

After the pear flowers were falling
the peak got drunk
When the melody was flying
willows were crazy

The moonlight shone in front of the bed
the autumn entered in a dream
The maples lighted on the slope
the wild goose wrote lyrics

5/22/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第10135首对联体诗 The 10,135th Two Pairs of Couplets
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/cold-and-hot-3/
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... e-c8dd7b732ad0.html

罗志海

郑贤永 发表于 2020-5-22 11:28
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罗志海

情調  

停盞細聽花絮語
舉頭遙望雁南飛
鷗聲鶴影遊山水
酒興詩情品竹梅


Emotional Appeal

I looked up at the wild geese flying south
I stopped drinking
and careful to listen to flowers incessantly chattered
With interest of wine and feeling of poetry, I enjoyed plums and bamboos
Sounds of gulls and shadows of cranes visited mountains and water

5/26/2020格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第10156首對聯體詩 The 10,156th Two Pairs of Couplets
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/childishness/#content
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... e-c8dd7b732ad0.html

罗志海

我的中國

頭枕長城，腰墊長江，左邊東海，右邊西藏，巍巍華夏國
我名赤子，當存赤膽，身在祖家，魄在故園，烈烈偉男人
北疆固守，南陲拒盜，航母護洋，火箭升空，國土美無缺
社會和諧，老幼安康，青年創業，家庭致富，人民喜沐春

注：第一四句羅志海作，第二三句錢永德作。


My China

Head on the Great Wall
back on the Yangtze River
left East China Sea
right Tibet
China is towering

My name is Newborn Baby
I need to keep my sincere loyalty
my body is in my ancestral home
my soul is in my hometown
I'm a man of indomitable spirit

The North is firmly defended
the South is not stolen
the aircraft carrier protects the ocean
the rocket lifts off
and the land is beautiful and complete

The society is harmonious
the old and the young are healthy
the youth start a business
the family becomes rich
and the people happy to bathe in spring

Note: first and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.
Second and third sentences by Qian Yongde.

5/28/2020格律體新詩 ● 二十一絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Twelve-one Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第10167首對聯體詩 The 10,167th Two Pairs of Couplets
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/a-charming-picture/#content
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... e-c8dd7b732ad0.html